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The graphs produced bellow we can see quantity peoples in full and part-time employment in Australia during period between 1973 and 1993 years.

On whole time males prefered work in full-time nearly 100%, but in 1973 quantity of older worker males was been most than in 1993 with difference around 10 persents. If it to compare with full-time womans it wold be very differently, because thay prefered work in part-time. However in 1993 most percent females on that type of work sufficient dip to 20% between 15-20 years old maintained in that level and than rose to sharply 35% in 35-19 years. When in 1973 a yang womans will be prefer employment full-time a tiny bit more than 50% at 20 years than it want down year by year, but merely little than 10% choose a part-time it's growing up to 20% in 35-39 years and the next time decreased.Not a full-time males workers slump from merely 22% to 5% in periog between 15-25 in 1993 and from 7% to 3% between 15-25% in 1973 than declined in period 25-40 years to 5% and 1% consistently.

In conclusion we can mark, what ripe males prefer will be full-time workers than womans in whole life time period.