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    can you please grade my argument essay.
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    Default Re: Grade my Argument essay

    Hi mejiar, I would like to point out that I believe you did not want to say this:


    Is abortion under any circumstance wrong?


    This means: Do you think abortion is wrong at all? Is abortion wrong, I think it is not.

    I think you wanted to say: Is abortion wrong under all circumstances? Or : Is abortion always wrong?

    I have read only the first page, even considering that you wanted to emphasize the fact that we are talking about a 9-year-old girl, this fact is repeated too often.

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    Thank you for your suggestions.

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