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    Post Any suggestion how to improve my essay

    I am in need of suggestions of how to improve my essay
    I am also looking for someone who can point me out what is wrong with it so i can fix it before turn it in to my English professor. I really need to get an A grade.
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    Re: Any suggestion how to improve my essay

    Quote Originally Posted by mejiar81 View Post
    I am in need of suggestions of how to improve my essay
    I am also looking for someone who can point me out what is wrong with it so i can fix it before turn it in to my English professor. I really need to get an A grade.
    Hi mejiar81,

    Not that you might intend anything malicious ..., but it's a well-known fact that documents may contain corrupting computer viruses.

    You might get more responses by copying and posting your entire essay for review here within this thread.


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    Re: Any suggestion how to improve my essay

    Thank you.
    I guess you are rigth, Ill do that

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