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    1. People have, and still do, think that Korea is not an Ancient Civilization but Korea has many traits that qualify it as an Ancient Civilization, Korea starts at the time where it needs to, to qualify as an ancient civilization, it has advanced cities that make up Ancient Korea, in the cities there are also complex institutions that are made up of specialized workers, some of the specialized workers also worked on record keeping, and also, people studied to make better and more advanced technology.

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    Default Re: Could you please check this Thesis Sentence?

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    1. People have thought, and still do think, that Korea is not an ancient civilization but Korea has many traits that qualify it as an Ancient Civilization one. ,Korea starts at the time where it needs to, to qualify as an ancient civilization, it has advanced cities that make up Ancient Korea in the cities there were complex institutions with specialized workers; some of the specialized workers also worked on record keeping, and also, people studied to make better and more advanced technology.

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