All the best.
Someone once said, "Sometimes you have to poop where you wanna grow food."
The line that follows does not explain the quotation above. You need to do that.
In this context, I would like to avoid an direct estimation about the good or bad nature of television.
In the next line, you mention 'the matter':
Instead, I would like to express my own point of view about this matter.
What does 'the matter' refer to? That is, what exactly is the topic of your essay? You need to tell the reader clearly what they are about the read. Give them the Ws: who, what, where, when, how, why.