I saw a sentencel like this:
The setting for the premiere promised to be as grand, if not more, than the film itself.
I don't think the underlined part is correct. I think it should be "to be as grand, if not more than, as the film itself". Do you agree with me? Thanks.
original might be ok
yours is definitely wrong. i understand what you're trying to do with the agreement/parallelism, but no
i would say 'if not more SO,'
Last edited by AintFoolin; 20-Dec-2004 at 16:14.