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    Parallelism

    "The longer it stores in the water, the bigger size of pearl will produce."

    Are these sentences making a parallel?

    If not, please advise how to fix it. Thanks.


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    Re: Parallelism

    They are, but I'd change 'stores' to 'stays'.

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