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    primrose90 is offline Newbie
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    Could you check the grammer mistake..please

    Hi.. Could you please check the grammar mistakes for me in the following paragraph..
    I need tommorow if it's possible:
    This is the para. :
    In conclusion, types, causes, and diagnosis and treatment are three aspects of fatty liver disease. Fatty liver disease has three types: steatohepatitis, acute fatty liver of pregnancy, and simple fatty liver. Steatohepatitis includes two types: alcoholic and nonalcoholic steatohepatitis. Acute fatty liver of pregnancy and simple fatty liver are both occur for unknown reasons. Eating a lot of calories causes fatty liver disease. It has common and uncommon causes. Fatty liver disease can be diagnosed by many things like a blood test and a biopsy. It does not have any treatment but many things can be done to avoid it and less the damage of the liver like losing the weight. Fatty liver disease is a common disease because it occurs in about one in every ten people.

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    Re: Could you check the grammer mistake..please

    PLEASE NOTE THAT I HELPED YOU TO CORRECT THE 'BLUE' PORTIONS.......
    BUT COULD NOT UNDERSTAND THE RED PORTION - SO JUST MARKED IT RED

    In conclusion, types, causes, and diagnosis and treatment are three aspects of fatty liver disease. Fatty liver disease is of three types: steatohepatitis, acute fatty liver of pregnancy, and simple fatty liver. Steatohepatitis includes two types: alcoholic and nonalcoholic steatohepatitis. Acute fatty liver of pregnancy and simple fatty liver both occur for unknown reasons. Eating a lot of calories causes fatty liver disease. It has common and uncommon causes. Fatty liver disease can be diagnosed by several ways like blood test and biopsy. It does not have any treatment but precautions can be taken against it and less the damage of the liver like losing the weight.
    Fatty liver disease is a common disease because about one in every ten people suffer from it.
    Last edited by abdmlkbd; 04-Apr-2009 at 17:03.

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    primrose90 is offline Newbie
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    Thanks

    Thank you very much...You really helped me : )

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