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    Default Investigation

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    The investigation showed that Miss Jiang and her boyfriend Mr.Li have ever worked in Quiyang City, the capital of Guizhou, as immigrant workers. Late April this year, Mr.Li said that he had some acquaintances in Anhui, and asked her to go to there to work with him. Miss Jiang didn't think too much, agreeably to the request. Later on, Mr.Li, with his girlfriend, who has been pregnant due to cohabiting with him, and other two persons of Anhui, all went aboard a train for Anhui.

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    Working in a new environment always refreshes me, NH.

    'The investigation showed that Miss Jiang and her boyfriend Mr. Li have always worked in Quiyang City, the capital of Guizhou, as immigrant workers. In late April this year, Mr. Li said that he had some acquaintances in Anhui, and asked Miss Jiang to go there to work with him. Miss Jiang agreed to his request without thinking too much about it. Later, Mr. Li and his girlfriend, who has become pregnant by him, together with two people from Anhui, boarded a train for Anhui.

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    Default Excellent!

    Quote Originally Posted by Mister Micawber
    Working in a new environment always refreshes me, NH.
    I am refreshed by what you said, too. :D

    Thanks for editing.

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