Hi, I’ve enumerated some points here and appreciate your sharing views with me.
whose rays “embraced” her lovers “over autumn’s proud treetop”.
- To whom or what the following pronouns refer? Maybe “you” refers to the sun
By the way, what does “lied” here mean? I think it should be “lay” not “lied”.
I am awaiting the sunrise
Gazing modestly through the coldest morning
Once it came you lied
Embracing us over autumn's proud treetops
A book says it functions as an adverb:
- What is the function of the underlined part? An adverbial or an adjective clause?
Frail and seemingly disoriented at times, he is looking vulnerable.
what should we put there instead?
- what’s wrong with the following sentence. Some say “burn” is wrong. If it is so,
All of a sudden, she gave a shriek and rushed off to the kitchen, where she could smell her cake burn.