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    sana jp is offline Newbie
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    Default I need urgent help for check this sentence.

    I need your kind help. I want to write about my deploma design project.
    Does the following sentence make sense?
    Thank you in advance.

    In my fourth year, the focus was on design and I completed my diploma design project, whose theme was a design for a complex of housing and commercial space considered the characteristics of the city, XXX.


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    abdmlkbd is offline Member
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    Default Re: I need urgent help for check this sentence.

    In my fourth year the focus was on design. In the design project of my successful diploma, the theme was a design for a complex of housing and commercial space, which considered the characteristics of the city.

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    sana jp is offline Newbie
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    Default Re: I need urgent help for check this sentence.

    Thank you very much for your help!!

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