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  1. Ever Student's Avatar
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    #1

    Smile please read my poem and give your advice.

    "Harmony"

    Let me so hard play the keyboards,
    That sing in a harmony with a friend,
    Working on a piece of music on roads,
    Passing through my town's on the mend.

  2. BobK's Avatar
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    #2

    Re: please read my poem and give your advice.

    This is the wrong forum. All your posts this month have been poems; please use the right forum.

    b

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