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    Ever Student is offline Senior Member
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    Smile please read my poem and give your advice.

    "Harmony"

    Let me so hard play the keyboards,
    That sing in a harmony with a friend,
    Working on a piece of music on roads,
    Passing through my town's on the mend.

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    BobK is offline Harmless drudge
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    Default Re: please read my poem and give your advice.

    This is the wrong forum. All your posts this month have been poems; please use the right forum.

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