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Robert, My Brother
My second brother, Robert, who is twelve years younger than me, was born in 2007 in Brazil.
We have 12 years old of difference.When I saw him for the first time, I fell in love with him. I thought that he was the most beautiful baby in the world. I fall in love with him.
the mostboth handsome and cute. He is the most attractive baby that I knowhave ever seen. He has big, andbrown eyes, and a pale complexion -- like me. He is both pale complexion and attractive. Furthermore he wears very cute clothes because sometimes I choose for him and is as a baby model.. Since he is a baby model, he wears very cute clothes, which I choose for him. Actually, for a baby, he is big.
Robert shouts a lot. he doesn’t speak yet, but he wants to say something.Robert doesn't speak yet; instead, he shouts a lot. And when he does, it seems as if he is trying to say something. Sometimes, when he wants to do something he is not allowed to do, he iscan be naughty. He wants to do something he is not allowed to do. Moreover,Still, he is cute because he understands when I scoldedscold him.
His hobbies areHe loves to irritate. For example, when my father or I want to paint something, he wants todoes too. Sometimes isthis can be very disgusting. He loves animals. We have 2 dogs, and he everydayevery day he wants to go out to see them. That is why I am very tired.
Finally, he is my cute baby forever. Even though I have
othera sister, buthe is my baby. I love him because he does cute things. Moreover,And now, since he says my name, I am very happy.
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