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    Spot Errors And Correct Them, Thx:)

    The following passage is from a sample resume. Plz spot the errors and correct them. Thnx:)

    ARL Trading Company, Beijing 6/2007 2/2009
    - worked as a database analyst
    - produced reports to upper managements monthly
    - train new employees on topics related with daily database maintenance
    - supplied data extracts to other departments
    - fulfilled temporary jobs
    I myself can only see one error: Line 4: train--> trained

    Can't see any other errors.


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    Re: Spot Errors And Correct Them, Thx:)

    line 3 >> "upper management"
    line 4 >> Trained new employees to carry out daily database maintenance


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    Re: Spot Errors And Correct Them, Thx:)

    The following passage is from a sample resume. Plz spot the errors and correct them. Thnx:)


    Quote:
    ARL Trading Company, Beijing 6/2007 2/2009
    - worked as a database analyst
    - produced reports to upper managements monthly
    - train new employees on topics related with daily database maintenance
    - supplied data extracts to other departments
    - fulfilled temporary jobs
    I myself can only see one error: Line 4: train--> trained

    Can't see any other errors.

    your resume is in the past-tense but line no. 3 where u told that u trained new employees is in the present tence. i think it should also be in the past tense like " trained new employees ........ ". i hope this helps :)

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