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    double that?

    Hello, there. I am translating a document about cosmetic products from Korean to English. The following is my translation.

    " Mascara that provides rich volume and curling that seem to be exploded"

    I used relative pronoun that twice. Is it okay?




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    Re: double that?

    Quote Originally Posted by goodsogi View Post
    Hello, there. I am translating a document about cosmetic products from Korean to English. The following is my translation.

    " Mascara that provides rich volume and curling that seem to be exploded"

    I used relative pronoun that twice. Is it okay?


    The choice of two that's is not ungrammatical, but unfortunate (different referents for the same pronoun).

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