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    In no country natual scenery presents so marked changes...

    Hello.

    "In no country natual scenery presents so marked changes at different seasons of the year as in Japan."
    This is a sentence from an English book.
    Can I say instead, "There is no country where natural scenery changes as remarkably season by season as in Japan"?


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    Re: In no country natual scenery presents so marked changes...

    It looks to me as though there are missing words:

    "In no country does natural scenery present so many marked changes at different seasons of the year as in Japan."


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    Re: In no country natual scenery presents so marked changes...

    "There is no country where natural scenery changes as remarkably season by season as in Japan."

    Do you see any errors in this sentence?


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    Re: In no country natual scenery presents so marked changes...

    You have a repetition of "as". Change one of them. I would use "so" instead of the first one.

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