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    Default Sentence ok?

    It's no coincidence that when America goes around the world to Iraq or Afghanistan championing democracy that never once, ever, have these words been uttered: "You should establish yourself an Electoral College."
    Is this sentence ok? Something seems to be missing after the 'when' part.

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    I'd remove 'that' from before 'never'.

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