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    peter123 is offline Senior Member
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    Hi there,
    Please proofread the following sentence.

    The students expressed their thanks to their teachers through dancing.

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    Default Re: proofread

    Looks ok to me.

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    Hi there,
    How about this ?

    Students danced to express their thanks to their teachers.

    tks
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    Equally ok.

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