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    Question Using bullet points... how to use them?

    I am writing some bullet points in my CV about my major achievements and I want to write:

    MAJOR ACHIEVEMENTS

    • Managed a change project for four years
    • Managed the launch of a new bank started up from scratch
    • Implemented an innovative and fully integrated CRM


    Or have I to use I at the beginning:

    • I Managed a change project for four years
    • I Managed the launch of a new bank started up from scratch
    • I Implemented an innovative and fully integrated CRM


    ???
    Last edited by SunMoon; 29-Apr-2009 at 23:11. Reason: Typo


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    Re: Using bullet points... how to use them?

    Quote Originally Posted by SunMoon View Post
    I am writing some bullet points in my CV about my major achievements and I want to write:

    MAJOR ACHIEVEMENTS

    Managed a change project for four years
    Managed the launch of a new bank starting up from scratch
    Implemented an innovative and fully integrated CRM


    Or have I to use I at the beginning:

    I Managed a change project for four years
    I Managed the launch of a new bank started up from scratch
    I Implemented an innovative and fully integrated CRM


    ???
    Better without the pronoun.

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