Try to be more business-like in your letter. Be sure to talk about WHO will pay for all these renovations or changes in your apartment.
Mr. Smith, builder
XYZ Apartment Buildinga
Dear Mr. Smith
My Name is......... We have purchased an appartment in ...... building on the 1st floor, apt. no.......
We request the following changes in our appartment :-
1. Install the sink in North East corner of the kitchen.
2. Move the refrigerator to the north-West corner of the kitchen ( just opposite to the sink but not in front of the kitchen entrance.)
3. Re-hang doors so that they open clock-wise when entering the house (?? Is this what you mean?).
4. Kitchen granite platform colour should be
5. Install a swing hook in the middle of the ceiling in the patio areas.
Please contact me during the hours of X and Z to discuss these changes.