Nice piece! May I suggest the following corrections and comments? :
East, West, Hometown Is Best
If I have enough money, I want to settle down in Gulang Island of Xiamen City, Fujian Province, where I was born.
The weather there is always agreeable all year round.
all the year around. It never snows in winter. Azure skies and blue seas embrace this serene island. There are no air pollution and noise pollution in this small clean island unlike the highly commercialised city -Shanghai where quality of air and noises of vehicles makes me sick. Unlike the highly commercialised city of Shanghai, where the quality of the air and the noise of vehicles makes me sick, there is no air or noise pollution on this small, clean island. Except for ambulances and fire trucks, not a single bus or car is allowed in on this island.
has a nickname of is nicknamed, "Piano Island." Every now and then, tourists can hear the beautiful piano pieces music fly emanating from some households there. now and then. In the 1950's, there were more than 500 plus pianos in on this islands, and island. (Currently there are around about 200.) pianos on this island. On average, Around about 10% of all households own their own piano. on an average.
Except for those above, (Those above? -Which? -Where?) I can eat the foods I used to eat any time, and speak the mother tongue -- Hokkien.
Several days ago, I talked about foods with a net pal from Beijing.
several days ago. She asked me what the specialities of foods in my hometown are. I talked a lot to with her about that, and then she asked me, "Are you homesick?" Suddenly I realised it. (that) yes, I am. In my mind, East, West, Hometown Is the Best! in my mind.
P.S. The source of the picture is as below: