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    I was back to Hyd today morning and slept whole day.I am browsing through my emails now.I am planning to start to Ongole this Friday. And I would be there probably for one week.So, I am glad that for the first time I can attend two marriages at Ongole.Hope some of us would be there to meet.I will keep posting from here onwards.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ramanji View Post
    I was back to Hyd today morning and slept whole day.I am browsing through my emails now.I am planning to start to Ongole this Friday. And I would be there probably for one week.So, I am glad that for the first time I can attend two marriages at Ongole.Hope some of us would be there to meet.I will keep posting from here onwards.

    I was back to in Hyd today this morning and slept the whole day. I am browsing through my emails now. I am planning to start to (start out) for Ongole this Friday. And I would will probably be there for one week. So, I am glad that, for the first time, I can attend two marriages at Ongole. I hope some of us would will be there to meet you (?). I will keep posting from here onwards.

    You need a space after a period.
    You can leave out "I" only in very casual abbreviated writing, as in "Hope you're well". In a longer sentence, it's best to put it in.
    Your use of "probably" and "I hope" is conditional enough without also using "would". "Will" is better in both places.

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