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    Is the following paragraph error-free?

    Below are Venkateswara Kalyanam's pictures taken at my home town ,Malla varam and of course I found my relatives and was happy to read about the event in paper .All village people came to my place to see venkateswara kalyanam .And they will conduct feast by collecting money every year and I donated 40 kgs of rice as my share.


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    Re: Is the following paragraph error-free?

    Hi ramanji
    Below are Venkateswara Kalyanam's pictures of Malla Varam, my hometown. I found my relatives and was happy to read about the event in the paper. All the townspeople came to my place to see Venkateswara Kalyanam, and they will be holding a feast every year from now on. I donated 40 kgs of rice as my share.

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