I admire Bill Gates because he is talented inventor and the richest people in the world . When he was a child , he was interted in computer very much and spent a lot of time on writing computer program. He was such an intelligent student that he scored 1590 out of 1660 on his Sats and subsequenly enrolled at Harvard in 1973 but he dropped out in 1975 to stared a software company. He with Paul Ailen founded Microsoft. During his career at Microsoft , Gates held the position of CEO and he help his company to became one of the most successful company in history . Microsoft earned a lot of money toward selling Microsoft computers to everyone and helped Gates to became the richest people in the world.
Another reason, I admire Bill Gates because he is the most generous man in the world. He spent his money on feeding the children in Africa, donating money to help cure ADIS and giving money to schools technology. Although he defiantly rewarded himself with the money he has made , he is still trying to make world a better place
Bill Gates is always the one I love and admire most. He is idol for me.

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