**As soon as he had awoken he rose from his bed and began to feel hungry. He bit a magic tomato and blew the seeds out of his mouth. The seeds flew through the air. They rode on the wind until they reached enchanted tree. The tree shook its branches and the magic bells rang.**
I would also maybe write: As soon as he woke up he rose from his bed.....instead of as soon as he had awoken...
- For Teachers