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    #1

    Please check my grammar

    Hi,

    I would like to seek for help to check my grammar in below sentence.


    Thanks.
    wai wai

    Thanks for your reply.
    Base on your recommend, for doing this upgrading and archiving how many man-days would you need and would you send the consultant over here to helping us? Can I have the detail of proposal and the quotation base on your advice? By the way, for upgrading OS we can do it ourselves.


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    Re: Please check my grammar

    Based on your recommendations for doing this upgrading and archiving, how many man-days would you need and would you send the consultant over here to helping us? Can I have the details of the proposal and the quotation based on your advice? By the way, we can do the for upgrading of the OS it ourselves.

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    #3

    Re: Please check my grammar

    Thanks for your great help in checking out my mistakes ! I would like to know that can I change the "doing this upgrading and archiving" become to "doing these assessments" ?


    Best Regards,
    wai wai..


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    Re: Please check my grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by WaiWai View Post
    Thanks for your great help in checking out my mistakes ! I would like to know that can I change the "doing this upgrading and archiving" become to "doing these assessments" ?


    Best Regards,
    wai wai..
    It depends, WaiWai - are they upgrading and archiving or just assessing whether they can/what needs upgrading and archiving. These activities are very different so you need to be clear about what it is you are having done.

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