please correct my Essay and please give a score
Hello, How are you keeping? I hope that everything goes very well with you and your family.
As we have not seen each other since we graduated from high school, our principal of high school is going to hold a big, marvelous reunion party on 28th of May at 7 pm in the high school at the conference room. The party will be last until 10 pm, and there will be live music, and delicious food will be served for dinner. In addition, after dinner, previous students will be given a gift as a memory.
Please join us I bet you will be pleased by this party. This party would give a chance to meet our old, intimate friends and our beloved teachers of high school.
Please let me know whether you can come or not. I am waiting to hear good news in this regard.
Last edited by rezashena; 28-May-2009 at 05:56.
Re: please correct my Essay and please give a score
I cannot correct or score a homework assignment for you, but I will tell you that this is not an essay. It is a letter.