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    Exclamation Please Reword This Paragraph ASAP!!!

    I'm really not good with writing essays and i need help rewording this paragraph.

    Between 1953 and 1969 the Chief Justice of the U.S. Supreme Court was Earl Warren. Supreme Court decisions made during the "Warren Court" era led to significant changes in various aspects of life in the U.S.. Several important court cases affected equal protection under the law, separation of church and state, and the rights of individuals accuse of crimes.

    Please help me as soon as you can!!!

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    Default Re: Please Reword This Paragraph ASAP!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by xXBl4ckSh4dowXx View Post
    I'm really not good with writing essays and i need help rewording this paragraph.

    Between 1953 and 1969 the Chief Justice of the U.S. Supreme Court was Earl Warren. Supreme Court decisions made during the "Warren Court" era led to significant changes in various aspects of life in the U.S.. Several important court cases affected equal protection under the law, separation of church and state, and the rights of individuals accuse of crimes.

    Please help me as soon as you can!!!
    If you have to reword the paragraph, you are being asked to rearrange the words without losing any of the information. This would involve using different clauses as the start of the sentence, for example, and you might have to add or delete linking words, like 'and' and 'between', depending on how you choose to phrase it.
    For example
    "From 1953 to 1969" is a rewording of
    "Between 1953 and 1969"

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