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Reka and parrot
Once upon a time there was a little girl called Reka lived with her parents. She enjoyed her summer holidays after hectic schooling days. She spent lots of time going out with her friends and playing chess. One day she saw a parrot which wounded and fell down in front of her home. She took it to her mother and did everything to make it recover from injury. Reka requested her mother to keep parrot with them. So they provided one nice cage and started feeding it with nuts and fruits. Soon they became very good friends and enjoyed each other company.
One fine day sparrow was going on that way when it saw the parrot in cage and felt sorry for parrot’s condition . Sparrow said “oh! My dear parrot, being in cage you are missing things like roaming around forest and sharing food with friends. Parrot replied “here I am getting food without effort and my master takes care me very well. So I don’t have any inclination to come out of this cage”.Sparrow went away with disappointment.
After some days Reka summer holidays ended and she started going school with her friends. She could not have much time to spend with parrot and feed it. So sparrow started feeling lonely and decided to get out of the cage. It called for sparrow's help. They made plan to execute. Early morning Reka mother opened the cage to feed parrot. Mean while sparrow came fast and bit on her hand so that parrot escaped happily.
Reka came back from school and started crying inconsolably. Reka's mother told to pacify her “you have been not taking care of her as you are busy with school . Anyways parrot will be very happy at jungle with her family and friends. We should feel happy for that dear”.
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