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    Sentence Correction

    Is the below statement grammatically correct ?
    "He is now a pediatric heart surgeon at the Royal Children's Hospital ?"

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    Re: Sentence Correction

    Quote Originally Posted by anandv View Post
    Is the below statement grammatically correct ?
    "He is now a pediatric heart surgeon at the Royal Children's Hospital ?"
    Yes it's fine.


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    Re: Sentence Correction

    Check for this one.

    "Purchase and Supply Management is the core of such a drive"

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    Re: Sentence Correction

    Quote Originally Posted by anandv View Post
    Check for this one.

    "Purchase and Supply Management is the core of such a drive"
    Yes it's ok grammatically, perhaps a bit obscure in meaning.

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    Re: Sentence Correction

    He is now a pediatric heart surgeon at the Royal Children's Hospital....

    Yes, but I know few surgeons who only do the heart. Maybe he's a chest specialist, or a thoracic surgeon....

    And as for the second sentence... I would advise a small change:

    "Purchase and Supply Management is at the core of such a drive".

    The verb here is a notional singular, so "is" is fine... unlike the other day's examples.

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