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    littlebaby is offline Junior Member
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    hello everybody,
    I have made a website of my profile and I wanna know if there is any English mistakes..can anyone tell me?

    Hello everybody, I am Chocobo.

    Why am I called Chocobo. It is just because of the lovely Chocobo of Final Fantasy.

    I love it very much, especially the Chocobo in Final Fantasy Tactics.

    I have its icon before, it was animated like that in the game.

    But the size is smaller, I am thinking if it can be as big as that in the game.

    It can be found in some Japanese websites.

    Some Japanese people use it as bbs icon.

    And I think they are also Final Fantasy fans.

    Why do I make this page. It is just for spending time.

    Maybe I hope someone having common interests bind us together.

    Actually, I really hope to have some Japanese friends.

    Not only Japanese friends, American, German, Italian...friends are welcome.

    And as above, my interests are listening to music (mostly are Japanese songs),

    watching films and movies, and surfing the Internet to find beautiful and lovely web materials.

    Perhaps I will learn better English, Japanese, German, Italian and etc...

    I hope I can chat with people from different countries in the world.

    The best place I would like to live in is Germany and Italy.

    But the problem is that I don't have enough money.

    And my English level is not high enough.

    So in the coming days, I will try my best to study.

    I hope I will really do it, not just to say.

    OK. I stop right here now.

    Maybe I will make a website later.

    I hope it is a very beautiful website decorated with many lovely icons.

    Thank you for visiting my profile.





    This site is created on Sunday 21, June 2009

    All the materials are found from the web

    If there is anything forbidden, please email me and I will delete it

    And the background music is the animation song "Rhythm Emotion" of Two-Mix

    It is just for listening not for distributing

    And that's all, thanks

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    apex2000 is offline Senior Member
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    Default Re: hello about my profile

    Look at the amendments, then ask if you need clarification.
    Only the alterations are shown below; your English is already very good.

    I had its icon before, it was animated like that in the game.

    But the size is smaller, I am wondering if it can be made as big as it is in the game.

    Some Japanese people use it as a bbs icon.

    Why have I made this page? It is just for spending time.

    Maybe I hope someone with common interests joins me there.

    And as above, my interests are listening to music (mostly they are Japanese songs),
    watching films and movies, and surfing the Internet to find beautiful and lovely web materials.

    The best place I would like to live in is Germany or Italy.

    And my English level is not good enough.

    So in the coming days, I will try my best to study.

    I hope I will really do it, not just say that.

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    littlebaby is offline Junior Member
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    Default Re: hello about my profile

    hello apex2000,

    Thanks for your compliment~
    and also your amendments!
    I have never thought that there would be so much silly mistakes...
    I think I have to learn from you and other members!

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    I (have) had never thought that there would be so many silly mistakes...

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