I have modified your letter keeping the facts and objectives intact. Ho this will serve your purpose.
I on behalf of students of the 2nd year batch beg to draw your kind attention to a sensitive problem concerning food/eatables being served by the canteen. At present, we get one single brand of fizzy drink with a single flavor of wafers. This is not only inadequate but also lacks variety. In our opinion, there is considerable scope to make the eatables quantitative with variations.
We shall be grateful, if you kindly consider our request and favor us by providing better food with sufficient quantity from the canteen.
On the behalf of whole 2nd year Batch
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