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    Please proofread my email... Thanks

    It is to inform you that the export consignment for Golden Hawks International, Myanmar will be dispatched by tomorrow.

    Kindly get the consignment ready.

    Best regards,


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    Re: Please proofread my email... Thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by shanz View Post
    This is to inform you that the export consignment for Golden Hawks International, Myanmar, is to be dispatched by tomorrow. Please make the consignment ready for collection.

    Kindly get the consignment ready.


    Best regards,

    You really need to give the warehouse a time and date for this collection. "By tomorrow" is far too vague and open to misinterpretation.

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