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    please check my writing

    I have just translated a decision report but I'm not sure about using suitable words and styles. Please help me check it. thanks a lot!

    This's my writing:

    DECISION
    “ Pay raising for staffs”

    The Chief Operating Officer of XXXX Tourism Services and Petroleum Joint Stock Company

    Based on:
    • The decision No 1291/QD-UB dated 20th June 2005 made by XXXX City People’s Comitee about rename from “XXXXX Tourism Services Petroleum Company” to “XXXX Tourism Services and Petroleum Joint Stock Company”
    • Labour code
    • Salary Comitee’s meeting report dated 5th January 2007 about “ Pay raising for staffs”
    • The recommend of the Head of Administrative Organization Department


    Decided

    Article 1: Pay raising for Mr XXXXX

    Post: Member of Board of Directors
    Concurrently Deputy Managing Director of Branch in XXXXX

    • Old salary : Level 7/8 Coefficent: 4.20 Allowance: 0.4
    • New salary : Level 8/8 Coefficent: 4.51 Allowance: 0.4
    • Month salary will be multiplied over three times if the business has effective results

    This decision will take effect since 1st January 2007

    Article 2: The heads of Functional Administrative Department and heads of relevant units and Mr XXXXX will be responsible for the implementation of this decision.

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    Exclamation Re: please check my writing

    DECISION/RESOLUTION
    “ Pay revision of (raising for) staffs”


    The Chief Operating Officer of XXXX Tourism Services and Petroleum Joint Stock Company


    Based on:/Refence
    • The decision No 1291/QD-UB dated 20th June 2005 made by XXXX City People’s Comitee about renaming from “XXXXX Tourism Services Petroleum Company” to “XXXX Tourism Services and Petroleum Joint Stock Company”
    • Labour code
    • Minutes of the Salary Committee’s meeting (report) dated 5th January 2007 about “ Pay revision of (raising for) staffs”
    • The recommendation of the Head of Administrative Organization Department

    Decision taken (Decided)

    Article 1: Upward pay revision of (raising for) Mr XXXXX

    Post: Member of Board of Directors

    Concurrently Deputy Managing Director of Branch in XXXXX
    • Old salary : Level 7/8 Coefficent: 4.20 Allowance: 0.4
    • New salary : Level 8/8 Coefficent: 4.51 Allowance: 0.4
    • Monthly salary will be multiplied by (over) three times if the business has effective results / reaches new heights
    This decision will take effect from (since) 1st January 2007

    Article 2: The heads of Functional Administrative Department and heads of relevant units and Mr XXXXX will be responsible for the implementation of this decision.

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