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“ Pay raising for staffs”
The Chief Operating Officer of XXXX Tourism Services and Petroleum Joint Stock Company
- The decision No 1291/QD-UB dated 20th June 2005 made by XXXX City People’s Comitee about rename from “XXXXX Tourism Services Petroleum Company” to “XXXX Tourism Services and Petroleum Joint Stock Company”
- Labour code
- Salary Comitee’s meeting report dated 5th January 2007 about “ Pay raising for staffs”
- The recommend of the Head of Administrative Organization Department
Article 1: Pay raising for Mr XXXXX
Post: Member of Board of Directors
Concurrently Deputy Managing Director of Branch in XXXXX
- Old salary : Level 7/8 Coefficent: 4.20 Allowance: 0.4
- New salary : Level 8/8 Coefficent: 4.51 Allowance: 0.4
- Month salary will be multiplied over three times if the business has effective results
This decision will take effect since 1st January 2007
Article 2: The heads of Functional Administrative Department and heads of relevant units and Mr XXXXX will be responsible for the implementation of this decision.