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    Smile Correct Grammar for Monday's Mondays

    Here is the original text of the sentence I need to use:

    Join us for a meeting on Monday's from 6:30-7:30 p.m. Starting 6 Jul at the (place it will be at). At the bottom of the page it has Al-Anon Family Group and that is it.

    This is what I think sounds much better or more appealing.

    Join us Monday evening's from 6:30-7:30p.m. at the (place it will be at) for an Al-Anon Family Group Meeting.

    Thank you for your help!

    Cheryl


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    Re: Correct Grammar for Monday's Mondays

    Why all the possessives?

    Join us every Monday evening from 6:30-7:30p.m. at the (place it will be at) for an Al-Anon Family Group Meeting.



    Join us for a meeting each Monday from 6:30-7:30 p.m., starting on 6 Jul at the (place it will be at).

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