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    Please correct my cover letter

    I applied to study in your institusion and I asked Nuffic to support to pay the tuition fee.Nuffic wants to know the amount of the tuition fee.I kindly request the institusion to fill enclosed form and send it back to me. Thank you in advance. I am looking forward to hearing you.


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    Re: Please correct my cover letter

    Quote Originally Posted by Eds View Post
    I applied to study in your institusion institution and I asked Nuffic to support to pay the tuition fee. I have asked Nuffic for support with payment of the tuition fee. Nuffic wants to know the amount of the tuition fee. I kindly request the institusion to fill [COLOR="DarkRed"]complete the[/COLOR]enclosed form and send it back to me. Thank you in advance. I am looking look forward to hearing from you.It sounds grammatically correct to use 'am looking' but for this particular situation, at the end of a letter, we usually use 'look'.


    sincerley Yours sincerely,

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    Re: Please correct my cover letter

    Thanks for the help.

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    Re: Please correct my cover letter

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    Thanks for the help.
    You're welcome. However, it seems I still need some practice with the formatting buttons.

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