Poll: I want to give you a brief update as to where things are at with the assessments.

I want to give you a brief update as to where things are at with the assessments.

Good sentence
Clumsy sentence

Votes: 291
Comments: 2
Added: February 2006

Comments:

jo - 26th August 2008 21:06
too clumsy
 
Vidableek - 30th September 2008 17:59
I would sleep a little better if "at" was removed from the sentence.
 
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