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    [General] hitting in

    Which of the following sentences is better, #1 or #2? 1. On March 11th, 2011, there was a big earthquake hitting in Japan. 2. On March 11th, 2011, Japan was hit by a massive earthquake.
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    [General] amusement equipments

    Here are some Chinese Pidgin English sentences as written. Please help me correct them. Thanks! 1. When I was small, I visited an amazing place. It is named Tokyo Disneyland, where it brought me a lot of fun. You can play a lot of amusement equipment and enjoy the scenery there. 2...
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    [General] feast our eyes

    Are the following sentences natural English? 1. Enjoying the beautiful view and tasting the good wine, so nice time for today! 2. We feasted our eyes on the beautiful scene. 3. They stood drinking in the beauty of the landscape. 4. At Christmas you go riding to enjoy the view. 5. The...
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    [Grammar] small/little

    Is the word 'small' used in the sentence acceptable? When I was small, I visited an amazing place—Tokyo Disneyland, a theme park based on the films produced by Walt Disney.
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    [General] play outdoors

    Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks! Jack, Mary, and their parents had a family day on Saturday. They decided to stay at home because it was raining outside. It was 3:30 p.m., Jack was eating some popcorn and watching his favorite TV program while Mary was sitting on the...
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    [General] real things

    I posted the thread on other forum but got no response. Please help me correct the following sentences. Thanks! Some people might be so much impressed by the advertisements as to buy the products. Other people would usually not do that impulsive buy. I need to see the real things which I’m...
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    [General] secure customers

    I posted the thread on other forum but got no response. Please help me correct it. Thanks! Why do the manufacturers or stores spend a lot of money on advertising? I think it is because they want to increase the visibility of their own products and increase the customer's favorability of...
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    [General] all sorts of

    I posted the thread on another forum but got no response. Please help me correct the following sentences. Thanks! We can see advertisements everywhere around us. There are all sorts of advertisements such as food, drinks, houses, car, clothes, shoes, etc. But I see the clothes...
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    [General] intimate affection

    Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks! My sister is one of the most special people for me in my life. She always helps me with my studies and does some special things for me. She does special cards to me and buy me some things that I want. My birthday is during summer...
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    [General] from hand to mouth

    Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks! Pele is considered as one of the greatest soccer players in the world. He has begun to play soccer since he was a teenager. He grew in a poor family and had to live from hand to mouth by polishing shoes and boots. He started his first...
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    [General] real life

    Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks! At my school, Korean dramas are downright addictive. Fans of K-dramas are crazy about their casts. They pay attention to what the main characters wore, touched, read and even ate. In the eyes of K-drama fans, what do these actors and...
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    [General] transregionally

    Please help me correct the following sentences. Thanks! 1. This rush for photo stickers also triggered numerous Taiwanese fans of My Love from the Star transregionally to download photo stickers. 2. Its marketing strategy successfully made the continuous hit from inside the drama to...
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    [General] photo stickers

    Please help me correct the following sentences. Thanks! 1. With the popularization of messaging programs, recently photo stickers are taking the public by storm. 2. K-drama My Love from the Star in partnership with LINE, not only launched heroine Jeon Ji-Hyun’s live-action feature photo...
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    [General] standalone manner

    I saw some nice pictures on a chart gallery of a web site and wanted to download some of them. It says as following: You are allowed to copy, distribute, transmit the work and to adapt the work. Attribution is not required. You are prohibited from using this work in standalone manner. I...
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    [General] written in the script

    Please help me correct the following sentences. Thanks! In addition, K-drama’s creative narrations have incisively and vividly demonstrated the beauty of Korean culture such as cafes abound on the streets, street stalls on covered wagon, yellow copper pots for cooking noodles. The Korean's...
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