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    [Essay] Beyond the thin surface of welfare

    Hello guys :) Would you be so kind to correct my essay and make some suggestions about it? It is my first "historical" essay and surely there are a lot of mistakes. In this essay, they are considered mostly the negative effects of Industrial Revolution. Thank you in andvance. Beyond the thin...
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    [General] Love story

    Good afternoon guys! Would you mind checking my story please? Could you also tell me if it is adequate for the upper-intermediate level(FCE)? This is a task: Write a love story that begin with the following sentence: “It was only a small mistake but it changed my life forever.” Write...
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    [Essay] Analysis of Bennets' marriage

    Good afternoon guys! Would you please correct my literary essay and evaluate it in a scale of 0(minimum) to 100(maximum) ? I would be really glad if you evaluate it by respecting the following evatuation criteria: a)content b)organisation and cohesion c)range d)appropriacy of register and...
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    [General] Poem Analysis

    p { margin-bottom: 0.21cm; } Good afternoon guys!!! Would you be so kind to correct gramatically my interpretation of this poem? It is written by Emily Dickinson and I would be delighted if you give me also your personal judgement about it. Thanks a lot in advance. The poem is the...
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    [General] Writing Part 2 Informal Letter "from Unit 11 [Work & Job Satisfaction]"

    Good evening guys!!! Could you please correct my letter?Would you also mind telling me opinions about it(what I should improve....) and also if it is adequate for the FCE exam? Thanks in advance. This is the topic: You've recently started a new job. Write a letter to a friend telling...
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    Writing Part 2 Report "from Unit 9 TOTAL FCE Language Maximiser"

    Good evening guys!!! Could you please correct my report? It's the first report I've ever written so I'll be grateful to you if you give me your opinions about what I should improve. Thank you in advance That is the task: Your school intends to open a café/shop for students and staff on...
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    [General] Writing Part 2 STORY “from Unit 2 Grammar for FCE”

    Hi Guys!!! Could you please correct my story and tell me your opinions about it?(if it is adequate or not for FCE) That is the task: A magazine called “Memories” is running a competition. Readers are asked to send in stories of 120-180 words about a significant event in their early...
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    Unit 8 Crime & Punishnment from "Language Maximiser TOTAL FCE"

    Hi guys!!! Could you please explain to me the meaning of this idiomatic expressions???? 1)be caught red-handed 2)drift into crime 3)be behind cars 4)do time 5)turn a blind eye to 6)turn over a new leaf 7)pull the wool over somebody's eyes 8)a leopard can't change its spots 9)get off scot-free...
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    [General] Writing Part 2 Story "from Vocabulary for FCE"

    Good evening guys!!! Could you check this story for me and tell me some opinions about it(level B2=FCE)? The story must begin with the following sentence: Jakob was absolutely furious when he saw what was going on outside his window. Jakob was absolutely furious when he saw what was going on...
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    Expressions Unit 6/7 from "Language Maximiser Total FCE"

    Good evening guys!!! Could you tell me the meaning of this idiomatic expressions?? I've already searched into the dictionary but it didn't help me. These are the expressions: 1) make a statement about 2)keep up with trends 3)have staying power 4)set tongues wagging 5)the darling of 6)he...
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    [Essay] Writing Part 2 Essay(from Unit 3 "Total FCE")

    Good afternoon guys!! Would you be so kind to correct my essay?? As usual, I would also like you to give me your opinion about the essay and tell me whether it's adequate for FCE exam. This is the task:We're losing our sense of community because of the developments in new technology ...and...
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    Writing Part 1 (from "Unit 22 Grammar for FCE")

    Good afternoon guys! Could you please correct me this letter and tell me if it's good enough for FCE?(level B2) This is the task: Last weekend you went to Northwold for a short winter break.When you arrived you discovered that a number of the town'attractions were not available.Your travel...
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    Writing Part 2 Review

    Good evening guys!!! Could you please check this review for me and give me some opinions to write better reviews??Could you also tell me if the review is adequate for the FCE exam?? This is the task: You recently saw this advert in an English language magazine called Film World. Could you write...
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    [General] Writing Part 2 email

    Hi guys!!! Could you do me a favour?Is it possible for you to correct my letter?(Level B2 FCE) I have to write a reply to a friend I met on a study holiday in the Uk and tell him about where the party is going to be held,who will be there,and how you're going to dress up. Dear Mathew How are...
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