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    QUALITIES THAT CONTRIBUTE TO A SUCCESSFUL LIFE

    I would like some feedback to improve my essay. QUALITIES THAT CONTRIBUTE TO A SUCCESSFUL LIFE In this day and age, aspiring to be successful is a growing trend. To achieve this, we must consider different things. This essay discusses why being ambitious and honest are two paramount qualities...
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    THE TOWN CENTRE: CURRENT SITUATION

    “There has been a decrease in the number of people shopping in the town centre and now the town council has asked for proposals on how to improve this situation. In your proposal, you should briefly state what you think were the reasons for this decrease, explain what impact this has had on the...
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    INFLUENCES ON YOUNG PEOPLE’S CHOICES

    I have written this essay for practice for my CAE qualification. I would appreciate some feedback to improve it. ”Your class has been following a series of radio programmes about choices young people have to make and different things that influence them in these choices. You have made the notes...
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    Letter to college principal

    I have written this letter for practice for my CAE exam. I would like some feedback on how to improve it. Other pieces of writing have a title, but this one doesn’t, right? “There have been a number of complaints from students about the catering facilities at the college where you study. You...
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    CAE REVIEW

    I have written this review for my CAE qualification. I would appreciate some feedback on how to improve it. ”The editor of an entertainment magazine has asked readers to write reviews of TV series. You decide to write a review which compares two TV series you have watched, one you enjoyed and...
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    Do not let this long-standing issue fall into the oblivion of unimportance.

    I just saw this sentence in a book and I was wondering if I could use it in essays. ” Do not let this long-standing issue fall into the oblivion of unimportance”
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    PROVIDING NEW FACILITIES

    I have written this proposal as practice for my CAE qualification. I would appreciate some feedback on how to improve it. ”The council where you live has received funding to provide new facilities in the town. You decide to write a proposal to the head of the council recommending two facilities...
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    MEASURES TO IMPROVE OUR WELFARE

    I have written this essay for practice for my CAE exam. I would like it if it was checked. ” Your class has been watching a TV debate about measures that could improve people’s health and well-being in modern society. You have made the notes below: Measures to improve health and well-being...
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    A beach resort

    I would like it if this review was checked , as practice for my CAE exam. Thank you so much. I apologise for posting it on the wrong section of the web , I just started using it but I think I already know what to do. Thanks for your patience. A BEACH RESORT This review is aimed at analyzing...
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    Cae review

    I would like it if this review was checked , as practice for my CAE exam. Thank you so much. A BEACH RESORT This review is aimed at analyzing my experience in Paradise Resort, where I could have a whale of a time by unwinding. I will point out certain types of people who may have a penchant...
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    You have just finished a three-week study and work programme

    I would like it if this report was revised . I am preparing for CAE on my own. Thank you! “You have just finished a three-week study and work programme in an English-speaking country. You studied English language in the mornings and worked for a local company in the afternoons. The programme...
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    Report to check

    I would like it if this report was revised . I am preparing for cae. Thank you! STUDYING ENGLISH OVERSEAS This report aims foremostly to assess my personal experience as a student being part of a programme. It was organised for us to both enter a workforce temporarily and develop our English...
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    You have just finished a three-week study…

    STUDYING ENGLISH OVERSEAS This report aims foremostly to assess my personal experience as a student being part of a programme. It was organised for us to both enter a workforce temporarily and develop our English skills. OVERALL OPINION At no time had I expected the course to have such a...
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    Can you revise broadly a writing here?

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