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    [Essay] please help me to check my ielts essay, thanks a lot!

    hi, This is my first essay, https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/editing-writing-topics/112145-thanks-lot-check-my-essay.html I have got a lot of help from this forum, and below is my second essay. Could you please give me any suggestion on my grammer, vocabulary, structure and perspective...
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    [Essay] thanks a lot for check my essay!

    Can someone help me to correct my writing please? I would be pretty grateful! I have got 5.5 score in my ielts writing test in the past two tests, but the pass score is 6.0. My essay has never been checked since I started to learn this language, so I don’t know my problem and what I need to do...
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