dotancohen
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I am not a teacher, but I have decent command of the English language. I am editing a text that was not written by me. The author had decided to use this sentence structure:
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The car discussion website example.com hosts all kinds of forums from classics to muscle cars to educational and personal ones.
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As part of my duties, I can modify the punctuation and make very slight grammatical alterations. This is what I came up with, but if there is a better phrasing (however keeping the original sentence structure) I would very much appreciate knowing what I could improve (explanations, not simply rewording for me):
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The car discussion website example.com hosts all kinds of forums, from classics to muscle cars, to educational and personal ones.
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Thank you!
Subquestion: The first sentence of this post contains the word "had". Should that have been "has", as the decision is still influencing events? Thanks!
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The car discussion website example.com hosts all kinds of forums from classics to muscle cars to educational and personal ones.
"
As part of my duties, I can modify the punctuation and make very slight grammatical alterations. This is what I came up with, but if there is a better phrasing (however keeping the original sentence structure) I would very much appreciate knowing what I could improve (explanations, not simply rewording for me):
"
The car discussion website example.com hosts all kinds of forums, from classics to muscle cars, to educational and personal ones.
"
Thank you!
Subquestion: The first sentence of this post contains the word "had". Should that have been "has", as the decision is still influencing events? Thanks!
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