Formal email to university. Is it correct?

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AdelaPh

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Dear Sir or Madam,

This is to request more information about two of your Research Areas: Physics and Astronomy and Space Physics from the Earth, Planetary and Space Sciences. I am extremely interested in those two subjects, and I can’t wait to apply to your university for Fall 2021.
First, I want to study Astrophysics and I see that your university has three options. These two, Physics and Astronomy and Space Physics, have their particularities, so I would probably want to study both of them, I am not quite sure if that would be possible, and also what opportunities do I have after graduating.
Second, I would like to know which is the maximum value of the tuition fee your university grants.
Thank you in advance for your attention to my request and I look forward to receiving your response.
 
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Dear Sir or Madam,

This is to request more information about two of your Research Areas: Physics and Astronomy and Space Physics from the Earth, Planetary and Space Sciences. I am extremely interested in those two subjects, and I can’t wait to apply to your university for Fall 2021.
First, I want to study Astrophysics and I see that your university has three options. These two, Physics and Astronomy and Space Physics, have their particularities, so I would probably want to study both of them, I am not quite sure if that would be possible, and also what opportunities do I have after graduating.
Second, I would like to know which is the maximum value of the tuition fee your university grants.
Thank you in advance for your attention to my request and I look forward to receiving your response.

You said you are requesting for information for two subjects but I see there are more than two (Physics and Astronomy and Space Physics from the Earth, Planetary and Space Sciences).

What level/course of study are you applying for - first degree or postgraduate studies?

Physics and Astronomy and Space Physics - are these two or three subjects?

Are you asking for scholarship and study grants? And job opportunities in those fields?

Do not forget to allow space between paragraphs.
 
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