I apply for voluntary to Germany. I`d really love someone to check over my CV. :]

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Europass Curriculum Vitae
Personal information
First name(s) / Surname(s)	Marjanne Priidik
Address	(Estonia)
Mobile	+372 54 610 027
Fax(es)	-
Nationality	Estonian
Date of birth	02 May 1993
Gender	Female
Desired employment / Occupational field	Youth leisure
Work experience
Dates	06/06/2010 - 19/07/2010
Occupation or position held	Valet
Main activities and responsibilities
Name and address of employer
Type of business or sector
Dates	22/06/2011 - 24/08/2011
Occupation or position held	Valet
Dates	07 September 2011 - 14 October 2011
Occupation or position held	Child-care worker
Main activities and responsibilities	I dealed with babysitting. I took care for my neighbor`s 2-years old child. I have also looked after my 3-years old niece named Eleri and after my younger brother. Even now I frequently haunt my niece and sometimes I look after her at the weekends.
Education and training
Dates	1 Sep 00 - 7 May 03
Title of qualification awarded	Massiaru Primary school
Principal subjects / occupational skills covered	Grades 1 to 3.
Dates	02/09/2003 - 16/06/2009
Title of qualification awarded	Uulu Basic School
Principal subjects / occupational skills covered	Basic education (grades 4 to 9)
Dates	31/08/2009 - 22/06/2012
Title of qualification awarded	Pärnu Hansa Gymnasium
Principal subjects / occupational skills covered	Secondary Education (classes 10 to 12), media and humanitarian direction.
Personal skills and competences
Mother tongue(s)	Estonian
Other language(s)
Self-assessment		Understanding	Speaking	W r i t i n g
European level (*)		Listening	Reading	Spoken interaction	Spoken production
German		A2	Basic User	A2	Basic User	A2	Basic User	-	-	A2	Basic User
English		C1	Proficient user	B2	Independent user	C1	Proficient user	-	-	B2	Independent user
Russian		A1	Basic User	A2	Basic User	A1	Basic User	-	-	A1	Basic User
	(*) Common European Framework of Reference (CEF) level
Social skills and competences	I`m smiling when greeting people and meeting and I often show my interest in others - for exaple asking how their day was. I always notice other people`s feeling and I`m generally cheerful, supportive, friendly and very active young.
Organisational skills and competences	I actively participate in different events and projects offered by our local youth reality named T.A.N.K.
Computer skills and competences	Microsoft Exel, Scratch, Graphics, Internet use, MS Word, File management, Keyboard skills
Artistic skills and competences	I have taken part in some projects related to my home region youth center T.A.N.K. For example I attended to in making film about how to victual healthfully.
Other skills and competences	My hobbies are especially taking photographs, drawing, meeting friends and examining other cultures. Futhermore I enjoy listening music and I also like different kinds of sports like cycling, running, swimming and playing basketball and volleyball.
Additional information	I am an independent, creative, open-minded, flexible person who take the responsibilities.Futhermore, I like travelling a lot, because for me other cultures and countries are very interesting. Espacially German culture and I would really love to practice my German.
Annexes	One volunteer from Austria inspired me more than I had been before. She stayed in my village for 6 months and she acquainted for us Austrian traditions which are quite similar to German`s. Moreover I got inspired by my German lessons - these made me seriously wonder about Gemany and its culture.

 

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The formatting has made this almost impossible to deal with. Can you please just post the parts that have full paragraphs by typing in the information again? I realise that's more work for you, but the way the text has come out in your original post has just made it too difficult to edit. Thanks.

 

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Okey. It seems to be really impossible to read. -.-
Ok, I post the parts that have full paragraphs.

 

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Occupation or position held	Child-care worker
Main activities and responsibilities	I dealed with babysitting. I took care for my neighbor`s 2-years old child. I have also looked after my 3-years old niece named Eleri and after my younger brother. Even now I frequently haunt my niece and sometimes I look after her at the weekends.
	Dates 1 Sep 00 - 7 May 03 Title of qualification awarded Massiaru Primary school Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Grades 1 to 3. Dates 02/09/2003 - 16/06/2009 Title of qualification awarded Uulu Basic School Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Basic education (grades 4 to 9) Dates 31/08/2009 - 22/06/2012 Title of qualification awarded Pärnu Hansa Gymnasium Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Secondary Education (classes 10 to 12), media and humanitarian direction.

 

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Social skills and competences	I`m smiling when greeting people and meeting and I often show my interest in others - for exaple asking how their day was. I always notice other people`s feeling and I`m generally cheerful, supportive, friendly and very active young.
Organisational skills and competences	I actively participate in different events and projects offered by our local youth reality named T.A.N.K.
Computer skills and competences	Microsoft Exel, Scratch, Graphics, Internet use, MS Word, File management, Keyboard skills
Artistic skills and competences	I have taken part in some projects related to my home region youth center T.A.N.K. For example I attended to in making film about how to victual healthfully.
Other skills and competences	My hobbies are especially taking photographs, drawing, meeting friends and examining other cultures. Futhermore I enjoy listening music and I also like different kinds of sports like cycling, running, swimming and playing basketball and volleyball.
Additional information	I am an independent, creative, open-minded, flexible person who take the responsibilities.Futhermore, I like travelling a lot, because for me other cultures and countries are very interesting. Espacially German culture and I would really love to practice my German.
Annexes	One volunteer from Austria inspired me more than I had been before. She stayed in my village for 6 months and she acquainted for us Austrian traditions which are quite similar to German`s. Moreover I got inspired by my German lessons - these made me seriously wonder about Gemany and its culture.

Thanks for reading. )

 

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Occupation or position held	Child-care worker
Main activities and responsibilities	[STRIKE]I dealed with babysitting[/STRIKE]. I have babysat a lot. I took care [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] of my neighbor`s [STRIKE]2-years old[/STRIKE] two-year-old child. I have also looked after my [STRIKE]3-years old[/STRIKE] three-year-old niece [STRIKE]named Eleri[/STRIKE] and [STRIKE]after[/STRIKE] my younger brother. Even now I frequently haunt!!! (have you looked up "to haunt" in the dictionary. Are you a ghost?) my niece and sometimes I look after her at the weekends.
	Dates 1 Sep 00 - 7 May 03 Title of qualification awarded Massiaru Primary school Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Grades 1 to 3. Dates 02/09/2003 - 16/06/2009 Title of qualification awarded Uulu Basic School Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Basic education (grades 4 to 9) Dates 31/08/2009 - 22/06/2012 Title of qualification awarded Pärnu Hansa Gymnasium Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Secondary Education (classes 10 to 12), media and humanitarian direction.

See above. You definitely need to check on "to haunt". I have no idea what you meant but "haunt" is certainly not the right word.

 

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Social skills and competencies	[STRIKE]I`m smiling[/STRIKE] I always smile when [STRIKE]greeting people and meeting[/STRIKE] when I meet people and I often show my interest in others - for example asking how their day was. I always notice other people`s feeling and I`m generally cheerful, supportive, friendly and very active. [STRIKE]young.[/STRIKE]
Organisational skills and competencies	I actively participate in different events and projects offered by our local youth [STRIKE]reality[/STRIKE] group,[STRIKE] named[/STRIKE] T.A.N.K.
Computer skills and competencies	Microsoft Excel, Scratch, Graphics, Internet use, MS Word, File management, Keyboard skills
Artistic skills and competencies	I have taken part in some projects related to my home region youth center T.A.N.K. For example, I attended [STRIKE]to in making[/STRIKE] a film about how to [STRIKE]victual healthfully[/STRIKE] I don't know what you mean here. What do you mean by "victual"? And "healthfully" is not a word. Please try this part of the sentence again.
Other skills and competencies	My hobbies are [STRIKE]especially[/STRIKE] taking photographs, drawing, meeting friends and [STRIKE]examining[/STRIKE] studying other cultures. Furthermore I enjoy listening to music and I also like different kinds of sports like cycling, running, swimming and playing basketball and volleyball.
Additional information	I am an independent, creative, open-minded, flexible person [STRIKE]who take the responsibilities[/STRIKE] and I take my responsibilities very seriously. Furthermore, I like travelling a lot, because for me other cultures and countries are very interesting, especially German culture, and I would really love to practice my German.
Annexes	One volunteer from Austria inspired me more than I had been inspired before. She stayed in my village for 6 months and she [STRIKE]acquainted for us[/STRIKE] taught us about Austrian traditions which are quite similar to German[STRIKE]'s[/STRIKE] traditions. [STRIKE]Moreover I got[/STRIKE] I am also inspired by my German lessons - these [STRIKE]made[/STRIKE] make me seriously [STRIKE]wonder[/STRIKE] curious about Gemany and its culture.

Thanks for reading. )

See above. I have made some more amendments. I am wondering why you are having to complete this application in English if it's for a German volunteer program. You say in the application that you want to study and practice your German. It would have made more sense if the application form was in German.

 

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haunt!!! (have you looked up "to haunt" in the dictionary. Are you a ghost?)​

my niece and sometimes I look after her at the weekends.

Heehe, sorry. I made a big mistake. XD I`m embarrassed. I don`t know what I wanted to say.
I made so : ​

Even now I sometimes look after her at the weekends.

See above. I have made some more amendments. I am wondering why you are having to complete this application in English if it's for a German volunteer program. You say in the application that you want to study and practice your German. It would have made more sense if the application form was in German.

I also want to practise me English too, bcz without practice of my language I couln`t cope with university. :/

But thank U so much for the help. :]

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