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Do you agree or disagree? "For children, it is better to grow up in the country than in the city."
Despite their being a lot of advantages in children growing up in country i would prefer children should be grown in city.Generally,city is a place where their will be all type of facilities.Below are few points i have made to support my opinion.
Firstly,Education is very important for the children.If children are grown in a city they will have the chance to attend a good school.Normally schools in the city will have all facilities like that of internet services,highly skilled faculty,hospitals etc.So,It is better is go along with most facilitated one.
Second in the next,Children learn by seeing around.They follow their parents and people around build.By this culture of living children will learn their behavior .Normally in the city people will be more cultured so, children will be habituated to cultured behavior.
Which is very important as they grow up.
Finally,Children should be grown in city side,to get good education and to learn the cultured behavior as they should be in society as they grow up.I think this a good idea which is to be followed by every parent.
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