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chowbarry

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Please help me correct the following letter
Ask for re-arrangement of date of interview

My name is ABC, canadidate number: 123456. I am delighted to have received your invitation to attend an interview held on 08:30 a.m., 4 April 2013. However, I am sorry to inform you that as I have originally been scheduled to attend an examination at the same time, I am afraid that I am unable to attend your arranged interview. As such, I would like to ask for your assistance in re-arranging the date of interview, desirably later than 4 April 2013, so that I can have an opportunity to talk with you all. If you have any queries, please feel free to contact me at 1234-5678. Thank you for your assistance.

Thank you very much!
 

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Please help me correct the following letter


Request for re-arrangement of interview date [STRIKE]of interview
[/STRIKE]

My name is ABC, and my can[STRIKE]a[/STRIKE]didate number is 123456.

I [STRIKE]am[/STRIKE] was delighted to [STRIKE]have[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]received[/STRIKE] receive your invitation to attend an interview [STRIKE]held[/STRIKE] on [STRIKE]08:30 a.m.,[/STRIKE] 4 April 2013 at 8.30 a.m. [STRIKE]However, I am sorry to inform you that as[/STRIKE] Unfortunately, I have [STRIKE]originally[/STRIKE] already been scheduled to [STRIKE]attend[/STRIKE] sit an examination [STRIKE]at the same time[/STRIKE] on the same morning, [STRIKE]I am afraid that[/STRIKE] so I am unable to attend [STRIKE]your arranged[/STRIKE] the interview. [STRIKE]As such,[/STRIKE] I would [STRIKE]like to ask for your assistance in re-arranging[/STRIKE] be very grateful if you would re-arrange the date of the interview, [STRIKE]desirably[/STRIKE] preferably [STRIKE]later than[/STRIKE] after 4 April 2013. [STRIKE]so that I can have an opportunity to talk with you all.[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]If you have any queries, [/STRIKE] Please [STRIKE]feel free to[/STRIKE] contact me [STRIKE]at[/STRIKE] on 1234-5678 if you need to discuss the matter.

I look forward to hearing from you with a revised interview date. Thank you for your assistance.

See above for my suggested amendments.
 
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