Bassim
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- Mar 1, 2008
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- Bosnia Herzegovina
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- Sweden
I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Do I need a comma after "husband"?
In her marriage, Anna felt like in a gilded cage, surrounded with great wealth and the insanely jealous husband who controlled her every move.
In her marriage, Anna felt like in a gilded cage, surrounded with great wealth and the insanely jealous husband who controlled her every move.