toanhntm
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- May 26, 2017
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- Native Language
- Vietnamese
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- Vietnam
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- Vietnam
This is my eighth attempt to write in English. Please correct any mistakes that you find.
Every summer, Tam and her family travels to DaLat. DaLat is one of the most beautiful city in the middle of Vietnam. The city is located in between hills and mountains. Actually, it is a small city. Everyone calls DaLat the city of the loving because it is a wonderful place for loving people to come.
Tam’s relative has a big house in DaLat and they are a big family, too. Every summer, all the members in her big family gather (together) at this big house. They meet, eat and talk each other. This is the tradition of the familly. Tam loves DaLat, but she doesn’t like eating hamburger. She doesn’t like the smell of hamburger.
When Tam arrives, she see a lot of familiar faces. Uncle Tuan and uncle Quan are playing chess together. Playing chess is their favorite, they can both play chess many hours without eating. Aunt Phuong and aunt Thung are cooking while aunt Giang are washing vegetable. Aunt Giang works for a five star hotel as a chef but she has got a pile of restaurant in the city. Aunt Phuong and aunt Thung are a office government.
There are five people talking each other in the garden. All of them are her cousin. Tam sees Linh standing near Ha. Ha has already had got three children. The youngest one is creaming. Then, the oldest one is creaming. Ha’s children are always creaming. Tam doesn’t really like children.
Then Tam sees an handsome man in the field. She stares at him. He caughts her stare. He smiles and walks up to her. Tam is nervous and embarrassed. She is nervous because the hansome man might be her cousin. When he approach her, he raises his hand and introduces himself Paul. Paul is a docdor. Ha’s child is ill so he is in here.
After Tam knows that Paul and Tam are not related. Tam is excited. Paul says “ Would you like to have a hamburger tonight?”. Tam joyful agree and says “I love humburger”.
I love hamburger
Every summer, Tam and her family travels to DaLat. DaLat is one of the most beautiful city in the middle of Vietnam. The city is located in between hills and mountains. Actually, it is a small city. Everyone calls DaLat the city of the loving because it is a wonderful place for loving people to come.
Tam’s relative has a big house in DaLat and they are a big family, too. Every summer, all the members in her big family gather (together) at this big house. They meet, eat and talk each other. This is the tradition of the familly. Tam loves DaLat, but she doesn’t like eating hamburger. She doesn’t like the smell of hamburger.
When Tam arrives, she see a lot of familiar faces. Uncle Tuan and uncle Quan are playing chess together. Playing chess is their favorite, they can both play chess many hours without eating. Aunt Phuong and aunt Thung are cooking while aunt Giang are washing vegetable. Aunt Giang works for a five star hotel as a chef but she has got a pile of restaurant in the city. Aunt Phuong and aunt Thung are a office government.
There are five people talking each other in the garden. All of them are her cousin. Tam sees Linh standing near Ha. Ha has already had got three children. The youngest one is creaming. Then, the oldest one is creaming. Ha’s children are always creaming. Tam doesn’t really like children.
Then Tam sees an handsome man in the field. She stares at him. He caughts her stare. He smiles and walks up to her. Tam is nervous and embarrassed. She is nervous because the hansome man might be her cousin. When he approach her, he raises his hand and introduces himself Paul. Paul is a docdor. Ha’s child is ill so he is in here.
After Tam knows that Paul and Tam are not related. Tam is excited. Paul says “ Would you like to have a hamburger tonight?”. Tam joyful agree and says “I love humburger”.