letter correction- please help me

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nino777

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hallo, i need your help. please chek/addit my letter

letter content: my boss gave me a task to write a letter draft for existing investors and funding organizations. This letter must contain some greetings, I must ask about their plans in 2015 in which field are they going to invest and if microfinance organizations are in their plan.



Dear MS. /Mr.

King Greetings.

I'm writing you in order to ask about your plans in 2015 years. In what fields are you interested in and where are you going make investment?

I’d like to say that in 2015 year (our org. name) is going to expand as for service centers as our loan portfolios and we will delight if you decide to invest in our organization.

Best regards,

Investors Relations
 

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I think the job of writing an important letter like that requires someone with a higher level of language and technical competence.
 
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