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Dear teachers,
Is this sentence grammatically correct?
It is clear-cut that, lack of a job, desperation, frustration and debts, combined, can destroy anyone.
Would this one 'look' better due to its formality?
It is clear that some problems combined, such as X, Y and X, can destroy anyone.
Very much appreciated
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Is this sentence grammatically correct?
It is clear-cut that, lack of a job, desperation, frustration and debts, combined, can destroy anyone.
Would this one 'look' better due to its formality?
It is clear that some problems combined, such as X, Y and X, can destroy anyone.
Very much appreciated
Offroad